dear Daniel,
yesterday has come and gone and i waited
dear crush, today i'm waiting and i dont feel rested
is it that you aren't convinced i'm a keeper?
is it that you're worried i'm a heartbreaker?
dear lover,
in case you don't know
i'm a lover, i cry when i hurt.
i laugh when you crack me up
and you make all of it come in a roll
dear future one,
i await your call once again
your memories will make this pain abate
while you choose to break me away
this love for you i must keep awake.
yesterday has come and gone and i waited
dear crush, today i'm waiting and i dont feel rested
is it that you aren't convinced i'm a keeper?
is it that you're worried i'm a heartbreaker?
dear lover,
in case you don't know
i'm a lover, i cry when i hurt.
i laugh when you crack me up
and you make all of it come in a roll
dear future one,
i await your call once again
your memories will make this pain abate
while you choose to break me away
this love for you i must keep awake.
for you my love is here to stay
Signed
Broken damsel
Signed
Broken damsel
Wow! Great
ReplyDeleteCool
ReplyDeleteNice piece;
ReplyDelete"i'm a lover, i cry when i hurt.
i laugh when you crack me up"
I have a lil' problem with the phrase"...crack me up". I think there should be something else there. This one doesn't flow with the preceding expressions...think about it.
nice poem
ReplyDelete